北京美聯(lián)英語出國(guó)留學(xué)英語專八漢譯英翻譯訓(xùn)練之文學(xué)類下
11. 會(huì)嬌羞地返身回避了：“返身回避”作“退回屋里”解，故譯為“withdraw coyly into the house”。
12. 人海洶洶：譯為“the turbulent sea of humans”。
13. 避風(fēng)塘：指“避風(fēng)的港灣”，故譯為“a safe haven”。
14. 給人帶來安全感：用to do不定式來翻譯，故譯為“to enjoy a sense of security”。
15. 洞天幽境 ：
“洞天”本指“上天群仙居住之處”，現(xiàn)按“超凡的住所”譯為“heavenly abode”。
16. 閣道：指古代皇家樓閣之間以木架空的通道，現(xiàn)以釋義法把它譯為“the erstwhile plank-paved path used exclusively by the imperial family for their vehicles to move smoothly”。
17. 愛逐臭爭(zhēng)利，錙銖必較的：中文的排比修辭法可以在英文中再現(xiàn)，這里可以使用“Those who...”的句型。
“愛逐臭爭(zhēng)利 ，錙銖必較的”可譯為
“Those who strive for fame and gain, and haggle over every penny”。Haggle over: argue, dispute, esp. the price of sth. or the terms of the bargain（爭(zhēng)論 ；討價(jià)還價(jià) ）。
18. 愛輕嘴薄舌，爭(zhēng)是論非的：譯為“Those who are sharp-tongued and quarrelsome”。
19. 愛鑼鼓鉦鏜，管弦嗷嘈的：“鉦”指古代行軍時(shí)用的打擊樂器，有柄，形狀像鐘，但比鐘狹而長(zhǎng)，用銅制成。“鏜”象聲詞，形容打鐘、敲鑼、放槍一類的聲音。“嗷嘈”指聲音吵鬧。只要譯文可以體現(xiàn)一番熱鬧的場(chǎng)景即可，故譯為“Those who love deafening gongs and drums as well as noisy wind and string instruments”。
20. 愛寧?kù)o淡泊，沉思默想的：譯為“Those who are given to profound meditation and a quiet life without worldly desires”。be given to 表示“習(xí)慣于 ；沉溺于”。
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Aren’t you weighed down with cares in this life of hard toil and exhausted physically and mentally? I would like to advise you often to take a walk in the lane in your off-duty hours.
That is the best way to take a rest. It will dissipate your fatigue and relieve your nervous tension. When you are ?dgety or depressed, go to the lane and wander around reciting or composing poems with your hands crossed behind your back. You will then suddenly fall into a bright mood and enj oy inner peace, forgetting both yourself and the external world. Don’t you have a sweetheart? Let me suggest that, instead of accompanying her on a visit to a famous park or scenic spot, you take her with you for a stroll in the lane at dawn or dusk. Over there, you two can chat freely and with even deeper affection, free from greedy sidelong glances or malicious squints such as you often meet with in busy streets. Suddenly, at a creaking sound, there may appear a ?gure by a door — usually an unsophisticated young girl. She will, at the sight of you, withdraw coyly into the house.
The lane is a safe haven for those struggling in the turbulent sea of humans to enj oy a sense of security. It is a heavenly abode in the midst of confusion. Unlike the erstwhile plank-paved path used exclusively by the imperial family for their vehicles to move on smoothly, the lane is a place for the common people to roam about leisurely.
Those who strive after fame and gain, and haggle over every penny, please go to the downtown area! Those who are sharp-tongued and quarrelsome, please go to the teahouse or restaurant! Those who love deafening gongs and drums as well as noisy wind and string instruments, please go to the opera house or theatre! Those who are given to profound meditation and a quiet life without worldly desires, welcome to the lane!
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